The Girl who got Bullied

 In our class, we are doing a cold task to see what we already know about it. Our cold task is                     based on narrative writing. This is what I did in 30 mins for my narrative writing.

I am also learning to self-assess my writing so I know what I am good at and what I need to work                                                                 on like figurative language.  

                                           I want to improve on metaphor and hyperbole

Once upon a time, there was a girl whose name was Grace. She was 12 years old and wore braces. Other kids would laugh at her because of her braces and she would run to the bathroom crying. She always got bullied by the same children.

 But no one knew she was a pleasant girl because she was so quiet. She was one of the best students in her class because of her quietness and the smartest too. When it was recessed she would always sit in the same spot under a tree she would always draw which she was very good at. Other girls would come over and make fun of her drawings and tip her stuff on the ground then she would have to pick it up. 

Then there was this boy who would help her pick her stuff up and look at her drawings and say those are very good and she would say thank you, he wore glasses he was a nerd his name was Jacob he liked Grace very much as a friend. But grace didn't like him because he was a nerd and she would think that everyone would laugh at her because she was hanging out with a nerd. No one liked Jacob because he was a nerd.     They would make fun of him and call him a nerd brain.

When the rang for recces all children went to their class they were doing their work 1 hour and a half later…

The bell rang for home time Grace walked out and one of her books fell out of her hand there was a girl behind Grace and she was looking in Grace's art book and laughed loud “Ahhhhh” and Grace turned around and punched her in the nose and it bled and then Grace grabbed her books and walked home.